Wednesday, 18 December 2019

One small step for man

One small step for man

For Summer Learning Journey I had to right a poem about if I was Neil Armstrong how I would feel on the moon.

I'm the first man on the moon
I think it's already noon
I felt really scared
I think they already shared
with the whole intire world
and my fingers were curled
I also felt proud
in front of a big crowd

Thank you for reading my poem if you want you can read my next blog post. Blog you later!!!


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1 comment:

  1. Eliza - SLJ19 December 2019 at 11:16

    Mālō e lelei Demitrius,

    Thank you for doing week one, day two, activity two! I thought your poem was very creative and unique, I like how you made it rhyme! That was very clever. I’m sure Neil Armstrong would’ve felt all of those things when he first set foot on the moon!

    If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you go?

    Well done on creating a choice post!
    Eliza :)

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